Monday, March 27, 2017

My special place

                  My special place by Ceanahlee

1.Waves crashing
2.Salt water in my mouth
3.Hoverboard
4.Lunch
5.Ice cream
6.Feelings
7. View  
“Crash” There were big waves crashing into each other, sand blowing everywhere “Ouch”.When we found our spot to put our bags and food we got changed into our togs and rushed out to the water.I had to take my baby sister out to the water and she started to cry because it was to cold she started to get used to it and stopped crying and started splashing.

Just as I hit the water I felt something touch my leg “yuck” it was a fish.I picked it up and took it to my mum and she screamed I screamed and put it in a bucket of water and took it to the car.But When my mum went to get my hoverboard she bring the fish back and tipped it out back into the water. She told me and I said it's okay and she said are you sure I said yes.

I glided through the water and opened my mouth “yuck” I got salt water in my mouth.I nelle spewed when I got up out of the water it was yuck.But It was yuck when I spit It out .My mum laughed and It was yuck I went to get a drink of water so my mouth ain't yuck.I had a drink of lemonade my mouth didn't taste yuck any more.

Just as I got my hover board and  got pulled out the water was past my head when I touch the ground.I got on my hoverboard and swam back to the sand so I was saff.Once I got back to to sand my sister jahleah was drowning so I had to swim back to the deep end and pull her back to the sand.


When my mum called out lunch I ran and  I had to run to my 2 sisters and my brother saying lunchtime we all ran to my mum sandwiches “yummy”.I asked my mum If i could have some ice cream she said yes “yay”.
When I was swimming I felt cold and happy at the same time. I got out and wrapped myself in my warm cozy towel and walked to the car.

When I got out I got changed Into some warm clothes and got into the car to go back home It was cool when I was leaving because I could see the sun going down And It was orange so it was a beautiful view.We packed our food and towel and togs into our bags so we can go home and have a shower and go to bed.And get the sand of my body and have a warm nice sleep without having sand on me.

When we left to go home I didn't want to go the water was nice and calm with big waves crashing and people surfing to the big waves.Sand was blowing at my legs so we all walked in the sea with our bags on.THe water was nice and calm to walk in so that we don't full over and get wet and go in the car all damp.

3 comments:

  1. Star - I like how you have put in lots of wow words into your writing
    Star - Also I noticed that you put different sentience starters.
    Wish - I don't think you need a wish

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  2. awesome describing words, cool!!!

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  3. wish - Maybe go back and fix your spelling because some of the words aren't spelt correct. also some of your sentences don't make sense.
    star - I like how you have put wow words example - "crash"

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